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I'm Not Sure Why All of This by ~DAWNeatsdishsoap:iconDAWNeatsdishsoap:

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I stick my toes into the flaccid skin
collected on the floor, as he tells me
that he’s going to construct me a wooden bra
and that cunning smile of mine
creeps across my face.
The headlights on the shitty asphalt,
of the pleasantly named subdivision streets,
illuminate the features of that thing they call a canine.
He asks me what is on my mind,
which always presses
for something that isn’t pessimistic.
She shows her teeth to the stench of foot odor,
and I tell him,
‘Her mouth looks like
    a vagina.’
©2008-2009 ~DAWNeatsdishsoap
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makes me want to sing Cherry Pie, but Kyle (hasn't) seen enough porn to understand.*
Daily Deviation, 2008-03-10

Daily DeviationI'm Not Sure Why All of This by ~DAWNeatsdishsoap is an incredible deviation from someone I've watched grow as a writer on dA. They gritty description and powerful imagery left me speechless. (Suggested by *TheKingofFall and Featured by ^StJoan)

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~LesCheveux:iconLesCheveux: Mar 4, 2008, 7:56:34 PM
I don't watch pornography. =/

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<caveatLECTOR>and jon beat me to uranus LOLOLOL

<concrete-surfer> your mom depreciates in value as she's traded

<intangebility> o man. pink is singing sweet dreams on tv atm, and madeline says "string trees are made of peas?"
~DAWNeatsdishsoap:iconDAWNeatsdishsoap: Mar 4, 2008, 7:59:23 PM
I could change it, but I don't think that's how our phone conversation went, sir.
~LesCheveux:iconLesCheveux: Mar 4, 2008, 8:00:19 PM
I never said I watched pornography.

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<caveatLECTOR>and jon beat me to uranus LOLOLOL

<concrete-surfer> your mom depreciates in value as she's traded

<intangebility> o man. pink is singing sweet dreams on tv atm, and madeline says "string trees are made of peas?"
~DAWNeatsdishsoap:iconDAWNeatsdishsoap: Mar 4, 2008, 8:05:26 PM
I swear you did!

Oh, Kyle, what am I going to do with you.
~LesCheveux:iconLesCheveux: Mar 4, 2008, 8:07:04 PM
You're going to stop thinking that I have seen pornography because I have only watched it once.

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<caveatLECTOR>and jon beat me to uranus LOLOLOL

<concrete-surfer> your mom depreciates in value as she's traded

<intangebility> o man. pink is singing sweet dreams on tv atm, and madeline says "string trees are made of peas?"
~DAWNeatsdishsoap:iconDAWNeatsdishsoap: Mar 4, 2008, 8:15:05 PM
Haha, and that would be enough to know what a vagina looks like, yes?
~LesCheveux:iconLesCheveux: Mar 4, 2008, 8:17:43 PM
Yes, but that's not the point.

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<caveatLECTOR>and jon beat me to uranus LOLOLOL

<concrete-surfer> your mom depreciates in value as she's traded

<intangebility> o man. pink is singing sweet dreams on tv atm, and madeline says "string trees are made of peas?"
~DAWNeatsdishsoap:iconDAWNeatsdishsoap: Mar 4, 2008, 8:28:32 PM
Right, because the point is, you don't watch pornography, ever. <3
*ipunchbabies:iconipunchbabies: Mar 5, 2008, 1:02:18 PM
I watch pornography.
Everyday.
~DAWNeatsdishsoap:iconDAWNeatsdishsoap: Mar 5, 2008, 1:28:51 PM
We should make some porn sometime.
:O
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