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You know I hate to tell you  this
but I was actually trying
that night when I
slammed the door
and walked around wearing my  gym shorts
outside in the snow thinking maybe if I lost my legs
it wouldn’t be so bad.

I probably would have stayed longer too,
if it wasn’t for that sticker
in his bedroom window that says ‘Santa stops here!’
even though Christmas was
practically a month ago,
and I’m standing where someone pissed

the words ‘FUCK YOU’.
Too bad we’re too old
to play pretend
like
it
doesn’t
still
bother
us.
going to make my face hurt worse.
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Aborro Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I wish i had been there... when this happend, or when it was written... both are as cool as the other
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Anonymity101 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2007
It's amazing how much you say with so few words.
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prepaidestiny Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2007   Writer
Your imagry never fails. I always feel like I'm right there, seeing it all go down. And everything you write makes me feel. You're amazing.
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DAWNeatsdishsoap Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2007
Oh dear, thank you it sounds so good to hear that you feel like you're there because sometimes I wonder if anyone could ever imagine the things I do and if I'm really just insane.
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prepaidestiny Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2007   Writer
I can imagine... I am out of my effing mind hun... You're alright. Really. And your work amazes me.
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prepaidestiny Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2007   Writer
Your imagry never fails. I always feel like I'm right there, seeing it all go down. And everything you write makes me feel. You're amazing.
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