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I find that every time
I try to eat that
god damn soup,
the little alphabet letters spell his name,
and then I feel
like I’m still just an asshole
with  knots in her hair because
sometimes I like him better dead,
I think you like the way
that my hair is always a mess,
and I ramble to myself
about
absolutely
nothing.
Katie,
did you walk into the wall again?

‘Sorry Mom,
ever since you let me put
that EXIT sign
on my closet door
I have  been confused.’
this, yeah well Mom, the kid with the bright eyes at BlockBuster said I sure can.



(at least I'm trying?)
Sorry Tarin and Dan, I know you guys believe in me
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Migratory-Coconut Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008
This'n.

LOVE.

(I always feel a little bit lame leaving comments for writing, because, honestly, I feel illiterate or something.)

Eitherwho. Grand. I enjoy your writes very much.

Carry on.
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DAWNeatsdishsoap Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008
You don't look illiterate, it's OK!
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prepaidestiny Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2007   Writer
Sometimes I wonder if I love her work- or her. Truely you're amazing.
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Aborro Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'de hope for her, could turn out nice... or horrible... tho this turned out nice, made me laugh

‘Katie,
did you walk into the wall again?’
‘Sorry Mom,
ever since you let me put
that EXIT sign
on my closet door
I have been confused.’

so funny ^^
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